Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company organization.

Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In today's busy world many people choose to be self employed rather than working at the traditional corporation. I think there are several reasonsfor this to become a trend in recent years and i personally convinced that there are certain drawbacks for working alone . Which i will try to address in following discussion

First of all, working aline or being self employed offers many new possibilities that usual workplace is not able to give. For instance, flexibility might be the major fact that has been motivating for self employment. Also, the technology advancement is making free-lancers work without any problems such as connectivity.Therefore, it is making the work environment more convenient and i think these are the reasons why new age workers tend to choose work individually.

However, I still firmly believe that being self employed has disadvantages that cannot be considered lightly. For instance, even though working alone in your home is convenient, it might also isolate one from a social interaction. Because workplace is not only for work it also has feature that provides interaction that fees persons relation necessity.,

To sum up, working alone or self employed can be advantageous in someway but the disadvantages far outweighs it in regarding to persons necessity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, regarding, so, still, therefore, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35922330097 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21412551319 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1802880564 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44073531652 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202215745022 0.084324248473 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1220540754 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270143310534 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239600064575 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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