Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep.
What problems can lack of sleep cause?
What can be done about lack of sleep?
Beyond any qualms , there are several compelling reasons why new generation is unable to get a sound sleep. To initiate with , the main infer is tension and stress which is commonly seen in every individual life .In fact, people are often seen bringing work problems in their home. Due to the peer pressure from the boss , the companions and the society denizens have put a lot of burden to their shoulders . Secondly, unhealthy eating habits is also one of the biggest reason for this problem as due to junk food one may encounter sever health problems like constipation, gastro , obesity and sleep deprivation .Nevertheless , majority of work in some sector are done by sitting on a chair and in front a computer which also affects our body postures , strain on the eyes and etc. To illustrate ,in a most citied survey it was said that unless the people will not improve their quality of life they may experience difficulty in their sleep. Hence, it is proved that these drawbacks cannot be overlooked.
Further reinforcing , there are myriads of logical solution that support the same view. To begin with, a lot of awareness is required to be spread about the importance of Yoga, Meditation and all other exercise as they eliminate negativity and brings positivity .Whereas , being physically fit one enhances their own personality and distract the tension and stress . Subsequently , it is vital for every person that they should not mix their personal and professional lives as due to this imbalance one cannot concentrate either on their workplace and neither at home which result in argument, frustration , anxiety and of course sleeping problems. To illustrate , in a recent health research it was seen that people who exercise and perform activities that brings positivity are much happier and healthy. Thus, it substantiate the above statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, in fact, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05352798054 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72283622976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.5972461794 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.388888889 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211662550265 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561230670991 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546094224225 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133174515016 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345875107973 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.