Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Nowadays, Technology is evolving day by day, People are more keen towards using online gaming apps to limitless. Also children are playing computer games on daily basis, Which is resulting in behaviour change, agression and much more. I strongly agree with the prompt.
The impact of playing games on computer is hazardous and deteriorating children's mental health. Over the time kids are addicted towards gaming that they don't even value academics. For example, I was stubborn towards playing computer games in my childhood as i recall correctly famous games like gta vice city, cricket 2007 , wwe and counter strike were the ones which i used to play a lot and that turned me into more agressive kid. By this behaviour change my parents took some strict action against me, After some time i was changed. So the best way to minimize the bad effects is to involve children in physical activities and spending some quality time.
Secondly, I have been through that phase when computer games were limited, But now there are new series of game edition which is the main cause for youth distraction. Youth are so confused in choosing what's best for them. For example kids are so influenced by games like world wrestling entertainment and counter strike that they start implementing on their friends which cause them a huge amount of mental breakdown as well as accidents. By getting influenced by games they start acting like one. To stop this adult should show them the right path and guide them correctly.
I would like to conclude by stating that, Everything in limit has postive vibes. Excesssive use of anything can lead to pychological change or more. Children should participate in various sports activity and keep themselves busy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... using online gaming apps to limitless. Also children are playing computer games on ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s are addicted towards gaming that they dont even value academics. For example, I w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... dont even value academics. For example, I was stubborn towards playing computer...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...example, I was stubborn towards playing computer games in my childhood as i reca...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ying computer games in my childhood as i recall correctly famous games like gta ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s games like gta vice city, cricket 2007 , wwe and counter strike were the ones wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and counter strike were the ones which i used to play a lot and that turned me i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rict action against me, After some time i was changed. So the best way to minimiz...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
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...main cause for youth distraction. Youth are so confused in choosing whats best for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98965517241 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53316588826 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4650709127 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279106144605 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853825607088 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954585601066 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149833097368 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745672716076 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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