Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs.
What problems does this cause?
What are some possible solutions?
In recent times, older workers have had to deal with a surge in competition for jobs due to an increase in talented younger workers. This essay will discuss some issues associated with this competition and some actions that can be taken to help old people find and retain work in the job market.
Being middle-aged or older has several disadvantages in terms of careers and employment. First of all, it is well known that old people tend to have less expertise in the skills needed for modern-day jobs. For example, young people are generally much more tech-savvy and have less difficulty learning skills that relate to information technology and the internet. Secondly, old people are at a physical disadvantage. The reality is that as people age they have less energy, meaning that young people are often able to be more productive than older people, and thus more attractive job candidates.
However, there are ways that old people can make themselves more employable. Firstly, they can and should focus on improving their skills through private study and professional development. With hard work, there is no reason why old people cannot learn the knowledge and skills that their younger rivals possess. In terms of physical disadvantage, adopting a healthy lifestyle is a simple yet effective way to become as productive as young people. Even retirees can sometimes outperform young people if they are dedicated to exercise and a healthy diet.
In conclusion, although old people do face challenges in the modern job market, with a commitment to working hard and a disciplined lifestyle, it is possible for older people to become more competitive when looking for work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13090909091 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7609221121 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.773083513 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346324708583 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119467847454 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860054574289 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226459358593 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759758062161 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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