Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons and this disadvantages of this trend?
In modern society, many people plan not to have babies when they are young. There are several reasons for this tendency, which could exert an adverse impact on both family life and community.
To begin with, there are some several reasons why an ever-increasing number of youngsters want to put off having kids in their life. Firstly, this choice allows them to have more time to pursue their career and enjoy their life when they are young. For instance, it is easier for a young couple to travel new places when they do not have babies to nurture. Secondly, it is true that nowadays, women often studying in highly qualified education system, so they tend to focus on develop their career and achieve more specific goals. Accordingly, many people decide to start raising family after having a stable job with higher income or more assets that could afford for many high expenses and ensure a better life for their children.
A number of people who want to delay parenthood are increasing day by day and this tendency have some adversely negative effects on both family and society. Firstly, when people having children later will cause a significant age gap between the two generations. This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their children. Secondly, when woman reaches an old age that make the woman’s fertility begins to decrease and often face to various of dangerous diseases like miscarriages or complications to pregnancy. As a result, babies would not have a good health to grow and easy to get sick.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why many people prefer to have children later in their life, and it could wield negative influences on people’s life and society as well.
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... when woman reaches an old age that make the woman’s fertility begins to decrease...
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... on people’s life and society as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92123287671 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49248259903 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0185926725 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353968332287 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125311614569 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815359761784 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224041846171 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054535623562 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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