Nowadays more people get married to someone of a different culture than they ever did.why is this happening?discuss both benefits and demerits of this trend.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.
It is undoubtely the case of that new generation is getting engaged with their own wish,should they do this or not.In my point of view he or she can get married according to human rights.
Firstly,there are many merits of getting married into other caste or religion.Moreover they can learn new things about different culture.By getting married with the person that who is belonging to another caste,so we can finish the discrimination of caste.Having a love marriage they both can understand and they can adjust themselves easily.
Apart from this,here are some pros of getting married into different religion. There language and style of living will be changed.However,they have to face problem of food.All the cultures are having different types of food recepies.In some religions people are not allowed to eat non vegetarian so how they can get married to that caste is having a marriage in different caste this will be against there rules that our guardians have made.
At the ending,there are number of reasons but the main motive of getting engaged into other caste is love.When two genders have attracton in between them.They fell in love after that if they can manage their life with each other.According to human rights section no:149A,284C they can get engaged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11004784689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01505270251 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.221278471 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.6 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180322713953 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115032183242 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261822593666 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11422616738 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301599172156 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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