Nowadays, most people are moving and living in big cities.
Why is this happening ?
Is this trend good or bad?
Many people are migrating to big cities to lead an ultra-luxirious lifestyle and to avoid the difficulties associated with staying in villages. I believe, this trend is dangerous for the development of the country.
There are many reasons for immigration. Nowadays, people wish to have lavish lifestyle by experiencing the comforts and the amenities that are available only in cities. For example, cities provide an opportunity to buy imported goods. On the otherhand, the merchants in villages do not sell foreign products due to lack of demand and affordability. Hence, village residents ...
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