Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university, but others think we should learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays , each company tends to offer student having a good certificate in their university due to it is such a greater way to judge abilities through their studies . others think that office experiences is more likely to concentrate on rather than studying lessons in class . I believe that two methods have its own pons and cons but spending time on academic knowledge could make a lot of differences .
Learning educational process in university require learners to have a lot of skills in order to improve their exam-driven curriculum . Obviously , universities and professors make opportunities for student to encompass all of skills related to studies . For example , after the end of a lessons , all of learners have a chance to present through slides or group work activities . All of lessons in university has profound impacts on student because of high standard in demanding such as note-taking skill or well-prepared before lessons . Consequently , educational study is a directly best transportation to absorb in-depth knowledge utilising on their future career .
Besides, if someone has a previous experiences in their future job , they will be easy to overcome the strange barrier that creating through the first time of working on their own . it is true that doing it in the second or several times , workers could do its more better as a results of getting a best compliment about this task . in contrast , others is struggling with the first time of doing something new and taking more time to discuss their problems . Moreover , experienced people may have a greater impression and then getting promoted more easily .
In conclusion , both ways gaining knowledge is really pivotal but studying related to academic which is the more likely method to follow .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2323943662 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93933109132 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2420785713 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193231658032 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675208861045 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427822518946 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109640156412 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174491338633 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.