Nowadays people always throw old things away, what causes this problem? What effects
does the phenomenon lead to? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays with the increasing production of goods people are tended to casting their elderly things and adjusting to others . this essay will discuss both sides of this problem and consider the economic side as a beneficial one and the pollution as a negative one.
throwing away a big amount of things will cause several problems regarding pollution and extinction of flora and fauna. Rarely do people realize about consequences of such actions. For example , by casting old things , there is appearing a need of production new ones for people , hence it will bring an overexplotion of natural resources.Furthermore , throwing away elderly things in ocean will have a negative effect on condition of flora and fauna . The more vegetable life will die out , the more fishes will suffer from this and in the end they will be finally eliminated. Moreover , considering the fact that fishes are being used as the main food in coastal provinces , it is needless to say that such extinction will exacerbate the situation for those who live there.
On the other hand economical benefit should also be considered by regarding this issue. it is evident that manufacturing new goods contributes to the appearance of annual proficiency for country . it can be easily exemplified by the fact that majority of markets sell their production and the taxes from these selling are going to be in government's charge and governments themselves have an opportunity to improve living standards of dwellers. For instance , a recent survey reported that the average level of living has significantly increased within 7 years in UK on the grounds of providing a big campaign of production goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12132352941 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99777873124 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9883893276 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139368904386 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541059938856 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423148877718 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920117904798 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387331980829 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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