In this modern era, individuals could collate datas through news and papers, however, the reliability of these pieces of information is raising sceptical attitudes among people. From my point of view, residents should not completely believe in the news given by the journalists,therefore, an excellent journalist ought to be honest in every report, as well as the capability of writing.
To begin with, people could obtain inappropriate information through some reports. Given the explanation, with the development of technology, numerous articles appearing on the Internet are usually published from unreliable sources, which are frequently written by unqualified journalists. For instance, VnExpress, one of the websites established in Vietnam, gave the untruth news of the Covid-19 pandemic, specifically the number of people succumbing to this disease, raising the concerns among people about this virus unnecessarily. As a result, numerous citizens came to the hospital to test the possibility of being infected by Corona virus, leading to the overload of many hospitals.
In order to be a superior journalist, that person had better develop their writing honesty. This is because within the precise datas, journalists could be successful in information transmission, avoiding disastrous influences. For instance, if a person is capable of giving the appropriate information on how to solve fever, many people could overcome their ailments without any implications. Furthermore, journalists should be able to master their writing skill, in order to give information without any mistakes. This is the key factor which can lead a journalist to meet their success, since giving the information with a suitable arrangement, residents could perceive messages given by writers effectively and be attracted by those pieces of information, then these journalists could obtain their reputation. A case in point is Hong Phong, a well-known writer in Vietnam, has gained his popularity through every perspicuous article written by him.
In conclusion, individuals should only believe journalists to a certain extent, and in order to be an outstanding writer, journalists should give honest information in their reports, as well as enhancing the ability of writing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71091445428 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24542767499 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554572271386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1521738898 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.923076923 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234930742369 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855526033872 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593422581358 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161920996937 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493345192842 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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