Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development?
The marriage age these days is increasing notably and there are more and more people choosing to tie the knot and give birth after their thirties. From my perspective, this tendency has both advantages and withdraws.
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for this phenomenon. First and foremost, financial stability is the prerequisite requirement. It appears to be shreds of evidence that monetary crises are among the most remarkable reasons for domestic conflicts that often lead to temporary separation or even divorce. In the age of thirty, people reportedly having the financial back-up to properly take charge of the new responsibility. Another factor that worth considering is that the people getting married and having children later may enjoy their single life for some time. It irrefutably that marriage is accompanied by several accountabilities such as looking after their spouse and assuming a newly formed family. As a result, numerous people nowadays keen on remaining celibate as a deterrent of taking on all these duties.
Nevertheless, the negative side of this raising disposition should not be underestimated. In the first place, getting pregnant at these ages can be quite risky. It has various scientific proofs that women planning to conceive at their thirties are more vulnerable to female infertility since they often found it difficult to giving birth naturally. An illustration of this is that there is an increase in mortality rates of women who has unsuccessful childbearing. Secondly, late marriage is synonymous with the age gap in the family is much more significant. The younger parents are believed to be more straightforward to sympathize with their children due to the fact that there are a few differences between their two generations. The late-wedded couple, in contrast, are among the forties during their child's puberty, which may make it uneasy for them to harmonize with each other
In summarize, while delaying getting married and having children may have the benefits of financial stability and longer single life, it may bring several potential risks when giving birth and make the age gap more notable
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'ages'.
Suggestion: ages
The marriage age these days is increasing notably and th...
^^^
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...joy their single life for some time. It irrefutably that marriage is accompanied by several acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, such as, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28323699422 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96931526986 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575144508671 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1203791275 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217275239388 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594811654675 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619557825235 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135696957692 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563420859298 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'ages'.
Suggestion: ages
The marriage age these days is increasing notably and th...
^^^
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...joy their single life for some time. It irrefutably that marriage is accompanied by several acco...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, such as, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28323699422 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96931526986 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575144508671 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1203791275 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217275239388 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594811654675 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619557825235 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135696957692 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563420859298 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.