Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Big cities provide numerous growth opportunities and People living there have lots of daily needs facilities and have high standard of living compared to rural ares. But along with many facilities people living in urban ares faces multiple problems in their daily life. This essay will highlight few problems which people face regularly and some possible solutions.
To begin with, population is the major problem of every city and due to increasing population and improving living standard more people are attracted towards purchasing their own private vehicles which increases traffic in large cities. While driving in traffic during peak time, people burn more fossil fuels which causes air pollution. Young generation are more impacted with air pollution as they are infected by respiratory problems such as asthma, heart attacks etc.
Unemployment is a another major concern of developed cities and this could lead to criminal activities in cities. People usually relocate to large cities in hope of getting good job but some unsuccessful attempts indulge them in findings
other ways to earn money like robbery and looting others.
To overcome these issues, Government needs to work with people and educate them to eradicate these problems. I believe
Administration should take initiatives to develop rural areas and motivate their citizens to relocate to countryside area.
If government can bring more jobs and daily household facilities in countryside, people will definitely move to less populated areas. For example, India is planning to built smart cities which will create working infrastructures and residential complex in same location outside the main cities for development of those regions.
In conclusion, In spite of having better facilities and high living standards in large cities, there are many problems which people have to frequently face. And i think administration looks for new methods to eradicate these daily lives issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53311258278 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70323021965 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6836971998 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35512439252 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120746647056 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741035915216 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140018920226 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945864914287 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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