Nowadays some older people choose to live in retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development
In this world, most of the youngsters are busy with hectic lifestyle; they do not have time for older people. As a result some older people like to live with their age people rather than living with own family. It seems positive because elder have their friends whom they can talk with, enjoy social activities together and do not feel isolated etc. On the negative side, in home, there is no one who take care of child if both parents are working, small child cannot understand morals of life etc. I would like to give my view in conclusion.
On one hand, many older people feel alienated because all family members are busy with schedule, both parents have work to do, child is busy with school tuition etc. Thus, senior citizens do not have able to share their problems. This is the main reason why some old age people like to live with retirement community. One reason is that, the ages almost same, all person could understand the problems. Moreover, all elders can enter social activities such as play games and their festivals etc. As a result, elders have good mental health tend to live longer. Another positive development is that, if grandparents live away from home children have more respect for them.
On the other hand, grandparents are only person who can teach ethics, social behavior, and important lesson for life because they have more life experience and life experience is the best experience. Furthermore, aged people need more care, if at their retirement community no one is available at emergency time then it may be risk of life. Thus, stay away from home with another older people may be risky for them.
To conclude that, if older live retirement community and it is good for their health, then it is positive development. Because our society needs elderly people to share knowledge about our tradition, culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they do not have time for older people. As a result some older people like to live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82018927445 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36861677165 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529968454259 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2851345843 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8823529412 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364405863491 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118404228751 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130967838602 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228581923292 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663480083038 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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