Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.
With the rapid development of digital technology, there is a popular opinion that public libraries should no longer exist. However, some people claim that they are still necessary and will never disappear. Both viewpoints require a closer consideration before formulating my perspective on this issue.
Firstly, those who support the opinion that libraries are not needed may have the following reasons. Thus, in the era of the Internet, people have unrestricted access to information in general and books in particular through countless online depositories and websites, which has reduced the number of visitors to libraries. As a matter of fact, libraries can provide only a limited number of books or media and cannot compete with the Internet that has much wider collections of resources on merely any topic.
However, the proponents of libraries put forward various important arguments toward preserving physical libraries. One of them is the fact that libraries often contain rare or ancient books that have not been digitized and can only be found in a traditional paper-based form. Moreover, a public library should be seen as a quiet area that is used by students and researchers in order to carry our their studies, thereby making a library a perfect knowledge hub.
To conclude, although contemporary public libraries have been losing popularity among general public due to the advent of online technology, their purpose to keep unique and ancient resources, as well as to serve as an ideal learning environment, can hardly be overestimated. I therefore believe that public libraries should continue existing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...aries have been losing popularity among general public due to the advent of online technology,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, in general, in particular, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39215686275 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90748282247 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0182591082 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15473561804 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607558099637 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296729738047 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951806459836 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285653139322 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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