These days, technological advancement prevail, which have been great if act on people, specially young adults. Because, telecommunication provide us a global connectivity. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss the topic in both point of view.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of monitor. One of the positives of mechanisation that, it works as a detective. What I mean by this is that, regime can easily handle the situation of any difficulties. For instance, nowadays, crime is increasing day by day but with the help of CCTV cameras as monitor, they provide a safety and there is decreasing of missdeed. Apart from that, mankind do every activity in under law or situation.
Turning to the other side of the argument, personal privacy shock is a major problem. CCTV are often installed in trial room of shopping centres, however, person may unknowingly and up and naked on tape while trying and Choosing. With regard to end customer, continuous monitoring may lead to him/her not enjoying any activity in a relaxed environment. In addition to this, it sometime being a cause of blackmailing.
In conclusion, the pros of monitoring People via technology outweigh the cons. How are ever, steps need to be taken there is no harm to the privacy, and integrity of people while monitoring them even when they do not know, that they are being monitored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... act on people, specially young adults. Because, telecommunication provide us a global ...
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...shock is a major problem. CCTV are often installed in trial room of shopping cent...
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... With regard to end customer, continuous monitoring may lead to him/her not enjoy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, while, apart from, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94142259414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95172197089 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661087866109 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.850231175 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240308226821 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638644605099 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600178258201 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128994160341 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750649978362 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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