In recent years cellphone tracking, security cameras and many other technological ways of collecting data are increasingly being used and most of the time people don’t know that. A similar situation appears when we talk about privacy and policy of apps, we don’t read them and so we are not aware of what data they are collecting.
In almost any case monitoring people is for security reason. Camera help police caught criminals and phone interception help discover criminal plans. The majority of those monitoring system have been built to protect citizens from terrorist attacks, indeed most of them have been introduced after 11 September and the worst attack from terrorism.
These systems are to protect us albeit there are a lot of disadvantages. First of all our privacy has been compromitted and we can’t know what data are taken from us, making us believing we are watched everywhere. Another factor is that we don’t know who has our data; we are not sure only authorities have those informations. Plus if someone could still them they could use those data against us.
According to me, until we are being tracked only by camera and phone calls, being protected from criminal acts that could kill us is definitely better than being recorded while we are in a pump station or in a supermarket. In addition, a lot of people who complain about these privacy problems don’t care that much when they use apps like Facebook, a real data farm.
In conclusion I think there are more advantages than disadvantages. Albeit I have to admit that we should know what information are being collected from us, making the entire process more transparent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
In recent years cellphone tracking, security cameras an...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...hey could use those data against us. According to me, until we are being tracked only by cam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97849462366 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67911496931 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.058268141 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177116073183 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721548019851 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849644159943 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106059113884 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499826178777 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.