Nowadays there are many medical surveys of treatments to reduce health problems. Who should conduct them, governments, individuals, or private companies, in your opinion? Give reasons of your answer and include relevant examples from your experiences.
Medical science is a powerful weapon which can be used to run the world on a progressive track. Likewise, there is a majority of people in many countries who are facing poverty, malnutrition and many other issues which are solved with the help of medical. One of the most controversial issue today leads to that, medical treatment surveys are helping people; but who should conduct these surveys? In the upcoming paragraphs I am going to give reasons for this trend with some relevant examples and assertions according to my experiences.
The first step to understand that, who can be better in conducting surveys; governments, individuals or private companies? One of the prominent reason is authorities. Similarly, government should conduct surveys as they has distinct facilities to approach people in different place either its big cities or small countryside areas. Only government is the one which has this authority to approach any type of place in there country. Although, as every individual have their personal life as well, so that will be difficult for them to leave their personal work and go to different place to access people. While its responsibility of government to help their citizens, so it will be easy for them to conduct surveys.
On the other hand, the second and foremost reason is advanced doctors. As we all know that government has numerous facilities which are highly beneficial. However, there are many people who are suffering from rare diseases which are neither well know by individuals nor by private companies and due to this only government can find out about these diseases with the help of advanced doctors and cure them. A good illustration to this is, in india this is responsibility of government to conduct these type of surveys. In 2018, Hindustan times newspaper revealed that government vanished 70% of diseases from many places by conducting surveys through the help of great doctors as well.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that, its significant to have all the major facilities and enough money to approach different types places for conducting surveys, whereas, government has all those features and this is the best option which can heal people effectively and efficiently.
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Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14835164835 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85048887055 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7062599737 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155036863067 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558329775346 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447948227414 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096476067775 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608691843948 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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