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Nowadays there are many traffic jams that cause long delays on the roads. Why is this happening? Suggest a solution to the problem.
In this modern world, it is undeniable that there is more travel time on the road due to heavy traffic. There are many car and truck users are increased on the roads however encouraging public transport can reduce the traffic jam which cuts down long travel time.
To begin, increase of car manufacturer result in more productivity and selling of cars. Due to the overpopulation use of the car is increased rapidly. Some people think that it is prestige to go by expensive large car then only others will respect. Moreover, raise in no of trucks and heavy vehicles indefinetly cause of traffic cong...
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There are many car and truck users are increased on the roads
There are many car and truck users who are increased on the roads
increase of car manufacturer result in
the increase of car manufacturer results in
Due to the overpopulation use of the car is increased rapidly.
Due to the overpopulation, use of the car is increased rapidly.
it is prestige to go
it is the/a prestige to go
Some of the solutions to these problems are government should encourage people to use public transport
Some of the solutions to these problems are that government should encourage people to use public transport
In addition, expanding road system widely, reduce the traffic.
In addition, expanding road system widely reduces the traffic.
even though public criticism the Indian government expanded the narrow roads
even though public criticize the Indian government who expanded the narrow roads
growth in car and truck users are reasons for the traffic jam
the growth in car and truck users is the reason for the traffic jam
Sentence: Moreover, raise in no of trucks and heavy vehicles indefinetly cause of traffic congestion.
Error: indefinetly Suggestion: indefinitely
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 258 350
No. of Characters: 1242 1500
No. of Different Words: 135 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.008 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.814 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.524 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.483 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.364 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.536 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.058 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5