nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Currently, it is being discussed why there is a growing amount of rubbish produced by people. In this essay I will examine the issue and seek some possible solutions.
To begin with, in regard to causes, it is undeniable that bad living habits of the public has given rise to the everyday garbage in ascending numbers. For example, people are addicted to using plastic bags to pack their goods when shopping and then carelessly throw them away when they return home. In addition, frequent industrial activities lead to a growing amount of industrial waste. In order to meet the greater need for goods, factories have to operate all day long, which means that they are producing garbage such as discarded raw material while manufacturing.
On the other hand, as to solutions, the government should encourage the public to apply eco-friendly packets, like degradable ones, which may be decomposed by bacteria within a short time. Thus, we are unnecessarily concerned that there will be larger amount of rubbish in the environment. For another, the government ought to draw up and enact harsh laws to force the factories to advance their production devices. With the state-of-the-art machines, workers can make full use of raw material and there will be less industrial waste.
To summarize, there is no doubt that plenty of industrial activities and bad living habits play significant roles in the rubbish augmenting. At the same time, however, to combat this problem, governments should urge companies to upgrade their production facilities and require the public to employ eco-friendly bags.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, in regard to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20542635659 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83969952562 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6707384103 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135856649327 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531322217594 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639296172478 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931425335465 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563287481365 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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