The number of old people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries, others believe that this group is more important for society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
It is considered by majority of humans that grey haired people are being escalated dramatically by leaps which lead to generate obstacles in the health arrangements. However, others claim that veterans are crucial for communities to offer vast amount of knowledge. In my prospective, a huge proportion of cost is expanding on elder masse’s treatments are responsible to reduce regime’s economy but these groups are vastly source of information so that is why they are mandatory for the globe.
The one school of thought deems that with the growing level of maturity , human bodies are enduring from various kinds of perilous ailments. In addition to this, hospitals required lots of latest machines to give proper treatments to senior citizens. As a result, it take higher percentage of government wealth who related to slight decline their economy conditions. In contrast, authorities not only provide enough health benefits to veterans but also many more services such as retirement pension, senior pension, discounts on another things who build up burdens on government treasuries. America, take, for example, spend 25 million dollars each year, out of his budget, for the well-being of veterans.
The another school of thought believe that grey haired people have a wide range of information along with experiences which can be proved helpful in solving bewildering situations. Likewise, anchors are deep treasures of knowledge related to our cultures and histories to utilise. Furthermore, in this case they assist offsprings to make familiar with their cultures, traditions as well. Even though, in nuclear families progenitors have hectic schedules so in that manner grand parents give aid to parents keep eagle eyes on their children in their absences. Last but not least, senior citizens are an essential to keep away juveniles from drug addiction, crime world and etcetera. For instance, Japan has appointed elder people to guide the children in order to develop sets-skills as well as removing some conative disease: isolation, alienation and depression.
In conclusion, although older people take up large part of regime money to keep them healthy but they have more social benefits related to humanity which preserve humankind in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, likewise, so, well, another thing, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40960451977 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82975097443 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646892655367 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0052522118 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151246862235 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435601854407 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289985674311 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816571166353 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243614839115 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.