Older people often say the life was better in the past than it's now. Do you think it is right or wrong? Give your reasons and provide relevant examples.
the older people feel that the life in the past was better than that we live today. I perceive that this view is true.This could be because of the economic and financial burden, overuse of technology as well.
Albeit, the economic growth as well as caring for creating and utilizing technology reveal the level of community development and welfare, they have counter-productive consequences. The economic load leads the people to be workaholic, they have no time for family as well as leisure and social activities, so they get stressed and nervous. Additionally, this economic burden has caused a noticeable alteration in the individual qualities. To illustrate, workers in corporations become greedy and envious of their colleagues's promotions or salaries raise, resulting in the relationships among people get worse since they aren't cooperative as it's desired. Thus I believe that the life in the past was perfect.
similarly, the technology over-consuming has made the younger isolated from the social interaction that blisses the Person via spending some time with people and friends as in the past. They spend extra time in front of the screens of e-devices like, tablet, laptop, and smart phone which create an introvert persons who can't communicate with the others and make friends. Therefore I agree that people lived simply and happily in the past.
To reiterate, I believe that the past life was calmer and more precious than the modern life due to the economic stabilization, simplicity of low-technology life. It is hoped that some of the spirit of the past could be retrieved to improve our recent life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19391634981 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95195667326 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4997303121 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159300091632 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727965138344 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881086284952 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112572040904 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562493481824 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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