One of the consequences of improved medical care is that the people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
As the medical treatments nowadays are more and more increasing, the length of time people live is also rising, so is their life longevity. Although some people believe that this is a drawback to our society, in my opinion, the beneficial effects of improved longevity in life outweigh the disadvantages.
Regarding the drawbacks of living longer, some people think that the longer you live, the more food and resources you consume, which will hold back the development of a country. Indeed, elderly people do not have enough strength and health to work; as a result, the government has to assist them by giving a pension every month. This will eventually cut down quite a large amount of money of government's budget and stop numerous investments with other nations. This demanding problem can pull back a country's development greatly.
In spite of the above arguments, I personally believe that the benefits that increasing life expectancy can bring to our society are far more significant than the drawbacks. Enhanced longevity in life would greatly contribute to raising the rate of experienced workers in lots of companies. Employers actually prefer a worker with lots of experiences rather than some fresh graduates due to the fact that companies will not have to spend a great deal of time to train these newbies. Additionally, experienced workers tend to be more flexible and skillful when facing an unexpected problem, unlike new employees with full of surprises and nervousness.
In conclusion, despite the idea that increasing length of living will be a disadvantage to the society, I would argue that this bring more benefits than drawbacks and completely support the development of medical care nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, regarding, so, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20863309353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86782478996 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8401765737 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259420641619 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842699830315 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737030144274 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151049527564 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739844721383 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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