One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantage of this development outweighs the disadvantages?
The emerging improvements in medical services around the globe has led people to live longer and their life expectancy to rise. I believe it is the advantages that outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will demonstrate that people are getting better quality of life, as well as the possibility of treating numerous diseases is rising followed by a disadvantage of increasing medical side effects.
First of all, medical improvements has contributed humans to live their life to a greater extent. In other words, the discovery of medicines such as drugs and therapies has made it possible to achieve our aim more easily. As a result, we shouldn’t have to worry about our health since there are a lot of treatments and drugs available for us which are more efficient and effective. For example, if we suffer from cough and cold, a single medicine table such as SINEX can heal the problem within a few hours. Hence, this saves more time and we can perform our activities without any problem. Secondly, possibility of treating uncurable diseases like HIV, Cancer, STD’s are rising along with the advancement in medicines. That is to mean, in the future, we have more chances of discovering ways of treating these life-threatening problems which has forced many people to loose their precious life. To illustrate, heart transplant wasn’t possible in the last decade, however, it has been possible as for now.
Those opposed to these benefits say that the developments in medicines and its technology has caused numerous people to suffer from severe side effects. They believe that people when gains addiction towards medicines tends to develop health problems like anxiety and depression. However, these issues can be diagnosed and treated with available treatments and therapies. For instance, people who suffer from depression can now join Yoga classes which have been proven to be effective in this case.
In conclusion, the benefits of living healthy and diseases-free life along with the chances of discovering possible solutions for untreatable diseases clearly outweighs the flawed argument that people suffers from several side effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33819241983 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86462695644 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2318874646 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193187982595 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692971335296 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764417622136 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141668344342 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100903376041 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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