One of the most important issues faving the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays some developing countries facing food shortage crisis how to overcome this problem is heated argument.A few people acclaim that genetically modified technique is good way to overcome shortage of food.Therefore in this essay I partially agree with notion of genetic food so i will elucidate it according to aformentation statement in the following paragraphs.
At the outset,To overcome shortage of food by using genetic method farmer increase production of food by virtue of hybrid seed as a result food can import and export to overseas countries and under developing countries .where's food not available proper so people can also enjoy different food in every season because these type of farming withstand different weather and climate and grow fast as compared to organic food .it will be beneficial to farmer as well as people.
On the flip side of coin,genetic technique may be beneficial to some extent but there are some other alternative method to overcome scarcitu of problems such as the united nation world food programme organized food during emergency condition,provide food through mid meal technique in schools.Another most considerable factor,to esclate availability of warehouse to store grain that can be effective to maintain large amount of food.Futher more, most of countries people waste food during consumption , within little bit awareness towards food scarcity , the extra food send to poor countries .The another prominent way , use varities of technique ,new machinary,improve land and water ,green revaluation method can overcomes also food scarcity problem which will be effective not only farmer also to poor nation.
In conclusion ,although genetic way pragmatic gor large amount of food production but in some extent ,government and agriculture farmer further take proper useful steps to menace the problem of food crisis in poor countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50344827586 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01941394549 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.640184709 49.4020404114 441% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 399.0 106.682146367 374% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.5 20.7667163134 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291237296412 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193619880569 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231245231855 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193619880569 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231245231855 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 13.0946893788 311% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.53 50.2224549098 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.62 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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