Online shopping is replacing conventional shopping stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, some part of people argues that it is better to purchase products by using online shops, which might tend to be popular and gradually replace traditional stores. Personally, I think this has both positive and negative effects on the way people shopping. This essay will provide suitable explains and examples.
There are lots of advantages about online shopping. First of all, people now can order their packages by using online shops, which are easier and more convenient thanks to the internet. Therefore, Their boxes will send it right into their house so they just need to come down and sign them to receive. Secondly, in online shops, all the products have written full information such as date, quality, location, and so on, which helps customers check their stuff clearly before deciding to buy. In addition, If the products are wrong or damaged but still send to buyers, they can request to have refund or replace new products so they do not need to worry about buying false products in online shops.
On the other hand, despite all these advantages, online shopping still has notable drawbacks. The first disadvantage is that people buy products from online shops, they might have been scammed if they pick these things up in fake shops, which are made by criminals. Furthermore, online shops development will cause many small local traditional shops to shut down because they do not have enough budget to remain the stores. As a result, It leads to numerous people are unemployed, which is a major threat to the community.
In conclusion, online shopping has positive and outweigh negative effects, but I believe that governments should have solutions to help traditional shops, which are still important to the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...et. Therefore, Their boxes will send it right into their house so they just need to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07638888889 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51074081586 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9371349408 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219657727897 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834392846764 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752216478024 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149332618669 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477875186422 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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