In order to find a good job, people should have a university degree.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern world, there is a widely held view that a high profitable occupation can be achieved by owning a university degree. I completely disagree with this statement.
To begin, the financial crisis has affected in a major and negative way the income of the university graduates. While a few decades ago, high education knowledge was able to guarantee a high salary, nowadays, new political regulations due to the overwhelming economic instability in many countries have minimized wages in white-collar jobs significantly. The proof of this is the fact that newly qualified nurses and doctors earn the same amount of money as military soldiers. Thus, a university degree does not give the potential of a good job in the present.
Furthermore, numerous occupations can provide a decent salary without academic qualifications. In the 21st century, the rapid and enormous development of technology has created new professions, such as web designers, who manufacture and sell blogs to individuals. Using non-paid technological tools available on the internet, they can reach a relatively huge amount of annual profit, averaging 50.000-pound sterling. In addition, influencers can use these blogs and other social media platforms in order to advertise and promote an abundance of commodities. Subsequently, there are several well-paid jobs without mandatory studies in universities.
To recapitulate, I believe that the way in which our society has changed over time, unfortunately, has eliminated the possibility of a good job for people with university degrees. Undeniably, financial instability and technology are the main factors of this situation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60869565217 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30462203602 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5989835742 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141277734982 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440692157131 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469198012704 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829197225566 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321856742729 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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