In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that learners should be allowed to pursue higher education without fees as the tuition price has been increasing dramatically. While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that abolishing tertiary fees would have an adverse bearing on students as well as society.
On the one hand, there are many compelling reasons why the free-college policy should be applied. Firstly, in terms of students, removing tuition benefits them immediately. For instance, citizens living in poor conditions would have more opportunities to attend tertiary and achieve bachelor degrees. As a result, they could have a better opportunity to develop not only their job career but also their living quality. Secondly, a society covering higher education prices obviously has numerous advantages. There would be a more educated workforce by the increase in graduates' influxes, which results in the growth of their nation’s economy and happiness.
Despite these above benefits, I would contend that waiving university fees may take a toll on many aspects. Regarding students, attending college without pricing is dramatically harmful to their motivations. As most learners have to pay money to be entitled to college, they would be less responsible for their learning process if the fees were removed. Hence their time, money as well as health would be wasted. Furthermore, due to the increase in the influx of people who graduate from university, tertiary qualification would lose its status and power. For example, graduates need to bring other degrees in addition to their university certificate in job interviews, hence it will reduce the essential of entering tertiary.
In conclusion, while some maintain that the government needs to make the university fees free for all, I believe that it is better not to waive the tuition fees.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35836177474 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8469115062 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8237041718 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202006858905 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636381216245 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511107118522 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13875064177 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449890648708 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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