In modern scenario, unprecedented technological advancements have modernized the present generation. Since last fifty years, Olympic Games and international competitions have played an indispensable role in our society. Numerous individuals consider that such events are gigantic misuse of financial resources, time and endeavours. In my opinion, international sports events demonstrate tremendous significance concerning financial as well as cultural diversification point of view.
Commencing the discussion, Olympic Games and international competitions play a significant role from various considered prospectives. Firstly, such events promote tourism and opens new horizons for the masses to explore the cultural diversity of other countries. Moreover, strengthens universal brotherhood and promote global peace and harmony to maintain natural serene atmosphere in the environment. For instance, numerous people witness Olympic Games from all over the world. This offers people tremendous opportunities to exchange the cultures. Also, this helps them to develop comprehensive outlook on life.
Further elucidating my perception, renowned sports personalities act as an epitome of excellence for the young generation. Numerous intellectual juveniles get inspired to work hard with perseverance and determination. For instance, many young individuals are ambitious to become like Virat Kohli and Christiano Ronaldo. Moreover, such competitive events play a pivotal role to generate revenues for the particular nation. Millions and billions of dollars are collected through the purchase of tickets.
To recapitulate, Olympic Games and international competitions play imminent role in our society. Such events significantly promote international peace and harmony. Moreover, it offers people remarkable chances to exchange the diverse cultures and enhance their knowledge. Apart from this, such commendable competitions inspire young generation to labour hard to achieve success and happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.39852398524 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34123009915 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5797926148 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2631578947 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33694589515 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094356775932 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880030700466 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207058274865 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601695061107 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.25 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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