Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
In the world of today, the rapidly growing population in urban areas is the major issue of whole countries. and both government and the individual have a responsibility to find ways to overcome these situations.
In the first place, there are many disadvantages to having overpopulation. In the beginning, This situation leads to overcrowding and poor quality of housing in large cities. People feel uncomfortable when they live around the crowd and bored to listen to the unusual sound of vehicles. In addition, People can face traffic in their everyday routine and People can handle health issues due to unnecessary garbage and dirt.
in terms of solutions, I believe that the government should take possible action to reduce this problem. Firstly, the government should introduce some law which in includes people can build society and apartment but they necessarily maintain some distance so that overcrowding situation reduce. Moreover, the government develop some hospital and garbage collection center and check their management because of people do not go there for a reason, their week management.
Naturally, an individual's portion is important to handle this situation. Individuals also maintain their family and live their life in an open area so maintain an overcrowding situation. What is more, when they go to their work of anything else, they should not press the horn and to obey rules.
Weighing up all consideration, it is clear that the problems cause by overpopulation in urban areas are very serious. Yet if the government and individual take responsibility, then it can also find some solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, what is more, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31782945736 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01746613185 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5988891564 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178619369539 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617506231515 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641124329133 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113052725826 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817309949784 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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