Many historical sites and museums are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit this historical sites and museums?
In the world of today, many historical places are available to gain knowledge and for entertainment. It is a fact that only foreign visitors come and see historic places rather than local people. This essay will examine the reason for this and suggestion some possible methods of attracting local people.
To embark on, there are several reasons behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, people also know about their history so that they avoided to visit their country museum. For a real-life example, all Indian people visit and watch taj mahal once in their life and that is why they do not visit taj mahal again. In addition to this, these days people must want a new taste to pass out their vacation, for this reason, they choose the long run for traveling and visit other places of their nation. Furthermore, local people have often lived in the area for much of their lives and either learned from school about their area's history.
Despite this, there are many ways to encourage local people to visit their national museum. To begin with, the government should host some events and celebrations at this place and invite their own country people to attend this. Another possibility is to have special promotions, such as reduce or free price of tickets provided in newspapers or magazines. Related to this, provide some passes therefore people encourage to come more regularly.
In conclusion, visitors have more motivation to visit the museum, but the government has many technics to encourage attendance of local people through cultural events and promotions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoided visiting'.
Suggestion: avoided visiting
...o know about their history so that they avoided to visit their country museum. For a real-life e...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'coming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: coming
... some passes therefore people encourage to come more regularly. In conclusion, visit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07307692308 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45639787749 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3793663176 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338731881243 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130959218274 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856972942476 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215236886412 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216853889499 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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