Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that due to advancement in technology people should watch movie on their tablets or in phone, while other believe that cinema is best place for watching movie with enjoyment. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and I am in favor of former view.
To embark on, there are many reasons why people believe that watching movie in phone or tablet in preferable. To begin with, people can set-up their own comfort and it gives them more peace then theaters. For a real-life example, people in theater become more aggressive because of more crowd and experience board while seating on cinema. In addition to this, people enjoy their own choice snacks and it is more health because of use good quality food. Also, it is cheaper than cinemas therefore, they save money and use elsewhere to find more happiness. Furthermore, People can take break or postponed their movies when they go for some work while watching movie without any loss.
On the other hand, those who opine that cinema have their own advantages, give their reason as follows. Firstly, theater is one of the places where people can watch movie with high sound quality and ultra-hd screen. While, at home we do not have this type of display so that, we cannot experience this situation. Secondly, people can order a delicious snack without preparing it. For this reason, they can take a breakthrough their daily routine.
I believe that watching movies at home have more advantages because of various reason. While, cinema also have benefits, but it is depending on people's choice.
To sum up, I restate that watching movie at own pace is more enjoyable than cinema.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90070921986 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36937819279 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7986784416 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159018350443 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606405822944 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286820504029 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100393310766 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352406010232 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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