Parents are the best teachers. What are the reasons behind it. Give suitable example to support your answer.

Essay topics:

Parents are the best teachers. What are the reasons behind it. Give suitable example to support your answer.

There is no even a shadow of doubt that parents are the best teachers for their children because they play paramount role for the development of their kids. To support my statement, I will discuss what are the reasons behind it before reaching at any conclusion.

There are ample reasons behind this phenomenon, but most important which we can take into account is that parents want to make their children good member of society. Therefore, from their childhood period they give enough knowledge about various aspects such as parents teach good moral values, communication skills and so on. What is more, parents are good teachers because they shot right path to children and protect them from bad habits.

Moreover, parents are next to God because they always want to become them more successful in life they support them and give good advice like what is right for them and what is wrong. As we all know that every successful person get success due to his or her parents. For instance, prime minister Narendra modi , who is the successful person and famous celebrity. He gets success because his mother taught him good skills which proved helpful for getting success.

To conclude, according to my point of view, parents are the best teachers who teach us lessons and give proper knowledge to tackle with problems. It is rightly said that person learn his first lesson of life from his home.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is right for them and what is wrong. As we all know that every successful person...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r instance, prime minister Narendra modi , who is the successful person and famous...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...modi , who is the successful person and famous celebrity. He gets success because his mother tau...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'such as', 'what is more']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23166023166 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.158301158301 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108108108108 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.030888030888 0.0501214627716 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108108108108 0.0437548338989 247% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127413127413 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.011583011583 0.0403226058552 29% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.32798474301 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034749034749 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.042471042471 0.0861772015684 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00772200772201 0.021408717616 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.030888030888 0.011925033212 259% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1401.0 1933.35771543 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86192468619 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34309623431 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246861924686 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133891213389 0.203846283523 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0836820083682 0.137316102897 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32798474301 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594142259414 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 60.3025361994 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7272727273 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3225982965 49.517814964 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 46.4134651959 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.24675324675 1.69124875643 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336393588964 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109830179584 0.102741220458 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.125958927976 0.0668466124924 188% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551848992308 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116072538646 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138147442826 0.134430193775 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109056333032 0.0742795772207 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.251113214409 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0337340890367 0.0638462369009 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238505287673 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879684278611 0.058150111329 151% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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