Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Several parents these days have the tendency of over-indulging in their offsprings, illustrated through satisfying all their demands. From my perspective, this nurturing method is extremely detrimental to the comprehensive development of the child and, thereby, resulting in several adverse consequences once they turned into adults.
On the one hand, there is a variety of justifications against excessive pampering of parents toward their children. First and foremost, does not seem unreasonable to suggest that being over-protected may foster the dependence inside the child. An illustration of this is that whenever the child gets caught up in an unfavourable circumstance, his parents will always show up to resolve his hassles. Therefore, he has fewer opportunities to acquire essential abilities including problem-solving or decision-making skills. In the second place, overprotective parents are attributing to the authoritative and self-centred of their child. Since all of the wishes, even the most unreasonable ones, of a youngster are constantly being fulfilled by his caregivers, he will consider himself as the most influential one and nothing but his request is imperative
Consequently, once these miserable children have grown up, the outcomes will be evident. One of the most outstanding consequence is that these young people will unable to live an independent life. There is no doubt that the over-pampered childhood had deteriorated their abilities to be self-sufficient. As a result, a simple barrier may become an insurmountable obstacle. The worst scenario will be these big kids parasitize their parent for their lifetime. Another result which is worth considering is the disillusionment. It goes without saying that the majority of spoiled children cannot accept the reality that there are things in life that cannot be accomplished and fall into depression whenever receiving an undesirable outcome
In conclusion, over-indulging of parents may be the culprit of the dependence as well as several bad personalities including authoritative and self-centred. Therefore, once they have grown up, they will suffer from disillusionment or unable to live independently
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... and self-centred of their child. Since all of the wishes, even the most unreasonable ones...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd nothing but his request is imperative Consequently, once these miserable child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74539877301 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52001984749 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579754601227 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5699042053 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13125994425 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427218818058 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047718172582 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882286221459 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326260800714 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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