In the past, most people lived in small village where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays more people Live in Large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were The advantage and disadvantages of living in a small community
Living in small communities brings to villagers many some benefits that can not be found when they live in the city. First of all, they have chance to enjoy the unpolluted atmosphere and water, as well as, eat fresh foods, fruits and vegetable that are not mixed with preservatives. Therefore, they will have a better health. Second advantage is that people in small towns have strong brotherhood.They are willing to help and support each other whenever their neighbors have difficulties. Another advantage is that people in rural areas are not always under tremendous pressure and stress as those living in urban areas, villager do not have to worry about living cost because in a countryside everything is much cheaper than that of a city.
However, living in small communities also has drawbacks. The living standard are lower than the city . It has fewer infrastructure, education system and advance health care facilities. Beside that rural areas do not have many opportunities for job, so people usually have to move to big cities for better jobs. The last point is lacks of opportunities for social life and the entertainment facilities such as shopping malls, cinema,...
Living in small communities has a lot of benefits which can not found in large city. However i believe that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits. Although it have a better living environment, it’s standard of living is low. people do not have chance to update the latest news, and have a good medical services .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85804419813 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574898785425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.577304133 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276943437249 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977190550372 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679114803877 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198426364764 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370507126961 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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