In the past, sports champions used to be motivated by the desire to win a match or to break the world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?
Many years ago, breaking a record or being the championship was the main motivation of any sports players when they attended a tournament. However, nowadays, it seems like some of them currently switch their desire into being renowned or getting money. This phenomenon obviously affects not only the spirit of sports but also the attitude of the young generation.
Firstly, the negative impacts of this trend on sports themselves are unavoidable. When sports players become famous, their training will definitely be interrupted a lot by an abundance of things that have nothing relating to their major, for instance, doing the advertisement videos, going to the events, being the model for a brand, etc. Moreover, if their priority is just the money, they will compete unfairly with the other athletes or even arrange the result. It will certainly leave a terrible image among the viewers and they will no longer believe in the fairness of sports.
In addition, young people are also affected by this phenomenon undoubtedly. They will assume that the world is not even-handed in all aspects. It makes them lose their hope and become unconfident about themselves as they think that they cannot reach any success even though they work really hard. As a result, the later generation will become a materialistic society, in which people will just only focus on how much they get, how popular they are but not how perfect their work is.
In conclusion, from the above arguments, the drawbacks of this trend are undeniable. Thus, we have to improve this bad attitude to bring back the real competitive spirit of sports as soon as possible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04779411765 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62692249175 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4906601672 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224586754958 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762279789126 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483168187109 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132738766899 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751327202179 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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