People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Nowadays, the problem with using legal and illegal drugs among young people significantly gains. Some sociologists sure that youth are addicted to adopt substances due to bad example of their parents and society. This problem has a wide use in the world and there are some recommendation to fight with it.
First of all, social circle has a great influence on the young person’s behavior toward the drugs. Sometimes adults drink alcohol or smoke cigarette to relax and get rid of stress, hence they show the example for youth, who are eager to repeat this. One of the main problem of society is the circle of friends such as bad gang. These people try to attract the teenagers’ attention and offer them various types of drugs. It is frequently when teens agree to use substance to seem cool among their friends. The solution of this influences can be the lectures in schools and colleges about hazard of using it and consequences for young health.
Another reason of widespread drugs is the demonstrate of the usage in the media and TV. Everyday people watch films, read news and follow famous people on the Internet. These media almost don’t filtrate the information, especially if news regard for celebrities, who show their other side of life with alcohol and narcotics, because they think that everything allowed for them. Moreover, there are a lot of movies, where main heroes take illegal drugs and make crimes. These are the bright examples, when teenagers want to be such as their favourite actors or heroes and follow that improper way. In that case, the governments should control media in the countries, which have to restrict content for people under the age of majority.
In conclusion, I can say that youth in the modern society are affected to use drugs by media, their own parents and friends. Besides, this tendency grows among young people with earlier age. Thus, the society should apply some recommendations, such as school conversations and restriction laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97897897898 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58798582755 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4041839621 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239104487588 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728581267801 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591757061522 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164389329275 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771050670074 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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