The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured.

The presented scheme explains the process of instant noodles production from flour to sealed products.
Overall, manufacturing has eight basic steps, which start from delivering flour by tracks to the storage silos and finish as prepared cups of noodles with noticeable labels.
It is observed that instant noodles consist of flour, water and oil, which are mixed together. The following stage implies that getting the substance rolls and creates dough sheets. Next step is that sheets are cut on strips, which are formed into noodles disks. These products are cooked in the special place with usage of oil, and consequently disks have to be dried during the sixth stage.
The next part of manufacturing is preparing the cooked products for further transportation. There are special cups, where noodles discs are put into. Hence, they are filled next stage by vegetables and spices. Final eighth step illustrates how these cups are being labeled and sealed. After all, prepared cups of instant noodles are ready for transportation and consumption.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, after all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31736526946 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58962478927 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3600788496 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194412455614 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704436973099 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506501835332 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118186979875 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293750670367 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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