Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In the modern world the tendency to have own business is becoming popular. People prefer work for themselves and do not want to work for other people’s companies.
Self-employment gives people an opportunity to lead their life in own pace. In other words, a person, who has business, is not depend on other people as the free activities and financially. This person can create schedule, which is convenient for their lifestyle, can make own goals and plans to attain them. People, who work for themselves manage money and control them without reports for boss and other people. These people know their budget and they can count the expenses and incomes to achieve the target. For example, according to the research of German sociologist, more than 76 percent of people who are self-employed and keeps track of expenses, think their work to be profitable.
The other hand of possession of own business is a great risk to lose it. There are a lot of situations, when companies are dropped. One of the reason can be unaware how to make business and how to spend money correctly. To create own business people should know the basic economic skills, because without them, people can waste their money and do not earn anything and afterwards to stop production. Moreover, there are unforeseen situations, when people are forced to close their business. For instance, the Guardian wrote that about 40 percent of small businesses were closed due to pandemic in March 2020.
In conclusion, I can say that people strive to be independent and to earn money without working for somebody. In this case people have a lot of pluses, such as managing time and money, but they also can face problems and lose their business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other hand of possession of own business is a great risk to lose it. There are a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88659793814 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63062403313 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3813196264 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214924384769 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719915975678 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735000064186 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138216029427 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047628875656 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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