Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is often argued that music can join people various ages and from different countries. People like musical compositions and song, but everybody has own tastes, hence, to my mind, this can divide people.
Firstly, songs in an unknown languages might repeal to continue listening to. Sometimes people prefer music, which is understandable for them. Besides, person fancies to find the meanings of songs, corresponds it on their life or in opposite to be transported to another world due to music. If people can not translate and understand words, they lose the interest to spend time on these compositions. For example, according to the research of British sociologists more than 60 percent of people do not continue listening to music, if they hear unfamiliar languages.
Second, people of diverse ages prefer music, which was made in their years. While many young people love listening to pop music or rap songs, most elderly people hate these styles of music and, instead, enjoy songs with positive or motivational meanings. In other words, the older generation do not understand, how people can listen to present music, similarly, youth dislike songs of past years. A recent survey, for instance, has revealed that old people in India like the Bollywood songs of the 20th century unlike teenagers, who hate this compositions.
In conclusion, some people claim that music gives an opportunity to unite different cultures and generations. As for me, people have own prefers, which effect on their choice of music, some people do not want to listen to foreign songs, other do not like modern or old compositions, and, as a result, music can not to join these people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, similarly, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08363636364 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68340476951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5324840152 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289674786933 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119147751907 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624987157669 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202612114073 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481852622433 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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