More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, a tendency to create family with children in their older age begins to spread with comparison early years. This trend have various advantages and disadvantages, witch divide people’s opinions into two side. As for me, there are a lot of positive moments of such tendency to outweigh negative ones.
Firstly, at the present time people try to postpone having children due to focus on their career. In other words, people have been studying for many years, the spend their time to get education and afterwards to find suitable job. They believe that they have to build successful career before children. Another reason of their opinion is to have financial stable and to feel ready for having babies, because it is the most significant responsibilities. Adults are able to raise a child and to give everything to him.
Secondly, one of the most beneficial aspects of this trend is that people can spend their time to live full before becoming parents. They can travel, educate themselves and do everything what make them happy. After all, people don’t regret about youth and become to ready to have a child. In the past young people got married early and they didn’t see the world beyond edge of their family, that could lead to difficult consequences such as divorce. For instance, according to the research of British sociologists more than 80% of people who married and have children after 30 don’t dissolve a marriage.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of having children in later age exist too. Sometimes it is difficult to have babies for older people due to their health. Some adults can lose their reproductive ability therefore they seek medical help, but there are situation, when medicine is helpless. In this way, the existence of examples of the use of surrogate services approve this problem.
In conclusion, I can say that people are able to decide when they want to have children due to possibilities in contrast to past. I think, that advantages outweigh disadvantages, but people should know both to make their decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, after all, as for, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99127906977 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64383262196 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561046511628 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8509687014 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3684210526 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39150458613 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108566817215 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056827594109 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215532172367 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033438068443 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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