Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas other think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, people begin to value and care about their culture, but they have different views on its protection, some of them claim that tourism put the culture under threat and want to forbid tourists to came, while others think that restriction has no sense and changes are inevitable.
On one hand, tourism brings some modifications to local culture. Dwellers suffer the travelers from other countries, who show their behavior and lifestyle to indigenous residents. Especially, it has negative impact on youth, because they can be easily influenced by other cultures and thoughts. Besides, any changes lead to disappearance of primary culture over time. So, the government has to solve such problem and insert rules or restrictions in the some places. For example, in the UAE entry for tourists with a large number of piercings is prohibited.
On the other hand, tourism has one of the major benefits to economics growth. For a number of countries, especially developing small states, the tourism industry has become the main industry or, at least, the main source of foreign currency and income. Tiny countries don’t have enough industries and resources to support levels of quality of life, therefore they are forced to develop tourism. For instance, the Turkish government has established a visa-free regime to attract tourists.
In conclusion, I can say that tourism can change regional culture, some people oppose this, other people want transformation. As for me tourism has two sides: the dark side is that it modifies local culture, the light side is economics increasing, but residents have to take care of civilization and folklore conservation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30566037736 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83843829122 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2346652065 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27022774281 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880938024531 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776097758722 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169282340129 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062392453056 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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