In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are two opinions about very high wage in some countries. Somebody argues that this situation benefits for countries, but others have different opinion and claim that this should be under the government control. In my point of view, amount of salary have to have restricts.
On one hand, amount control helps to do more equal condition between various layers of society. As a rule, for the same work employers have to pay equal salary, then, workers don’t want to change work place. People know that what kind of work they make and what they get after this. Also, to set up income amount the government should take into account the severity of work, harm to health, qualifications and region. For example, the government of Norway has established least of salary for person with accounting of every condition and way to live with comfort in the country.
On the other hand, high wage creates competition among people and increase country economics. Every employer want to be best on the trade, so, they strive to encourage the employees to do work better and increase salary or give premiums. The companies, employers and even workers always vie with others. Workers want to high salary, employers want to get the best laborers and improve own companies. Such competition affords the opportunity to develop industries and economics. For instance, Belgium has similar tendency and there is high level of average wage compared with other countries.
In conclusion, I can say that high salary for some people helps to develop country economics, but on other side the government have to control it for rational and fair distribution of income. To my mind, the regulation of wage is necessary to supporting of equality between people.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06551724138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60823036485 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0919465653 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254127519333 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763688147742 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695296141535 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164940721328 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491382879579 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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