People are living longer than ever before and many old people area unable to look after themselves.Some people believe that it is the responsibility of families to look after the elderly,while others say governments should provide retirement homes for them where they can be looked after properly.Discuss
A section of people believe that living longer ever before as well as above 65 age folks are unable to look after themselves however others belief it is responsible of their families to take care of them where as it is government duty should provide retriement homes for them in my prespective both government and family provide good behaviour towards them in this essay will examine both views with relevent examples to buttress my stand
to start with , people should prepare themseleves enough money when get retrie insteead of wasting in their children marriage ,birthday parties .so , that they do not have to rely an anybody for help if they save good amount for their illness days their are so many people will be their to look after them because of money they have . the reserve is so true and have plans of saving is better
however , old people only needs medical support and love in their age group who can take care of them talk with them , spending enough time with their beloved members increases their health and age for instance , one family has busy scedule in this runing world no time for thier grand parents or elderly people they throw them in old age homes but they should when they are small these did not left them at that age now its their trun to take good care and pay back their love
finally, it is government duty to provide enough care for them because atthe time of work till retriement they payed all taxes and servied thier society and country with full efforts to sumup all in my opinoin i would say it is the reponsibility of thier families and government to take good care let do not suffer at all . bring your hands forward to the helpless people throughtout the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61639344262 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1908452162 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 101.0 20.2975951904 498% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 357.63792988 49.4020404114 724% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 469.333333333 106.682146367 440% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 101.666666667 20.7667163134 490% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.3333333333 7.06120827912 387% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259906908857 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174716816413 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101197096905 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168122801735 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938602542564 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.2 13.0946893788 391% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.12 50.2224549098 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.3 11.3001002004 357% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.7 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.4 10.1190380762 419% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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