Compared to the past, nowadays the society have little knowledge about the environment. This essay will discuss the two main reasons for this, and will outline several possible solutions through which people can know more about the natural world.
Firstly, one of the main reason for this issue, is that, today majority of people around the world are living in suburban areas. Nowadays, the country sides are becoming isolated because most of the people are preferring to live in the cities, which provide better living conditions. Due to this people have less connection with the enviornment. Switzerland is an example for this, surveys have found out rust around 50% of the country dwellers have already left the villages due to the lack of good facilities. Another reason for this issue is the misconceptions of parents. Today, most of the parents do not allow their children to explore the nature, parents believe that if children play outside their homes they will hurt themselves. As a result, when they grow up they see the nature as a threat.
Secondly, regarding possible solutions, probably the main remedy would be to encourage environmental expeditions with family and family. This will allow people to know more about the environment. For instance, by visiting a zoo or a tropical rainforest people will understand the beauty of our environment and the wildlife living in it. Another possible solution might be to allow children to play in the environment. By exploring the nature around them children will understand the importance of the nature and when they grow up, they will be able to tell the same thing to their children.
In conclusion, it seems that changed living living locations and misconceptions of parents are the main cause of this problem. Possible solutions would involve environmental expeditions and allowing children to explore the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17704918033 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71378774279 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52131147541 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.61557583 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241002546639 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796317241636 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759822324922 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155603535096 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109368214995 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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