People living in cities today do not get enough exercise.
Why? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, people who work in the urban area do not spend enough time on exercise. The major cause of this is that they have no time left from their work and do not see the importance of doing so. What the government should do to cope with this problem is to educate people about the importance of workout.
The principal reason for a lack of exercise in city life is that they must dedicate their time to their work. In other words, most people come to the town to work and earn their living which requires spending time on transportation to their workplace. It takes a lot of energy to do these activities every day. When they have some time off, most people decide to stay relaxed and spend their time with family instead of doing exercise because it will give them more exhaustion. That is because they think exercising is not the same prior to their work and other duties.
In order to tackle the problem, the government should launch a publicity campaign to manifest the benefits of exercise and encourage people to do more of it. This event could start in the company by its policy to support and provide sporting equipment and place for their employees. For instance, Google, a well-known search engine company, have a workout space in their workplace provided to their workers free of charge. This will be able to shed some light on the problem and remind people why they should give some time for exercise.
In conclusion, city people lack exercise due to their busyness from working life and the way they prioritise exercise. Encouraging people to exercise more by creating the campaign to make a better understanding of exercise starting from the workplace where most people spend their time in a day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72093023256 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4245299985 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5749836395 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228676969691 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932024385005 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552951746222 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156537067796 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414651254708 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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