People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life.What are those problems?Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life.
What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

Residents of various metropolitan cities have to face many problems in their day to day life. From my perspective, the two most common types of issues are air pollution caused by vehicles and traffic congestion. Further, I believe that the state should encourage their citizens to migrate to regional towns but not forcefully.

Nowadays, citizens of massive towns are highly concerned with air pollutants. The primary cause of this phenomenon is the increasing number of vehicles being used by the fellow crowd which is responsible to emit CO2 particles in the air thus affecting the air quality which in turn leaving the people to be suffering from various respiratory issues such as asthma and other health problems. Also, the growing numbers of automobiles have created the problem of traffic congestion which increases the commuting time for the ground movers thus causing irrelevant delays to their destinations. For example, as per the recent survey carried by an environmental organization, the quality of air has highly degraded in last 10 years which is the major cause of concern for people being diagnosed with health issues.

A long term solution, to this problem, is that the government should motivate their citizens to move to their regional sites so that both the issues of both poor air quality and traffic jams can be set under control. But they should also emphasize on the fact that there should not be any forceful measures adopted to carry out the same because it might not be an easy option available for the people to migrate initially because they cannot just leave back their belongings and other possessions.

In conclusion, Natives of vastly spread towns have to undergo two major problems namely poor quality to breathe in and traffic congestion resisting the swift move. In accordance to which the government can advise moving to their regional sites to control the above mention issues but as opined there should not be any dominant method adopted.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to move'.
Suggestion: to move
...ance to which the government can advise moving to their regional sites to control the ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11349693252 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.630430252 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1527305715 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.545454545 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223212422387 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905709620816 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065112355045 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150897587002 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534966257373 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Nowadays, the large cities pay their attention from different areas looking for life-changing opportunities and this trend have cause a lot of problems. This essay will discuss two major problems: pollution and home overload and I do not believe should lead goverments to encourage people to move to regional area.
On the one hand, the level of pollution is increasing sharply and cause for concern among residents of big cities. Because of high volumes of vehicle emissions, it causes the degradation and is a significant contributor to the kind of respiratory disease such as acute tracheitis, lung cancer, etc. Additionally, the overpopulation in large cities is extremely putting pressure to work. The workers had to work overtime to meet employment opportunities with high salary and meet needs as well as affordability levels. It causes overwork with the high suicide rate like Japan.
In my opion, goverments should not what they can to encourage city residents to move to regional areas. Firstly, it is not easy to adapt the life in the smaller town. People have suitable work and have sufficient facilities for a stable life but when they move the another town, their life will be turned upside down, looking for a new job and settling down for their family to put pressure on them. Futhermore, it will be enough labour force. After that, companies will be short of manpower and cause economic loss.
In conclusion, serve air pollution and overworking are among the most serious problems facing city residents nowadays and I belive that goverments should not encourage people to relocate to other areas to live.