In recent years, there have been a number of problems that people in big cities
have to cope with every day. My essay will discuss two major problems which
are pollution and information overload, and personally I think those people
should be encouraged to move to regional areas.
Increased levels of pollution have been a great reason for concern among
residents of big cities. Owing to a high volume of everyday traffic, massive
quantities of pollutants such as CO2 are constantly released into the
atmosphere, causing the degradation of air quality. This is closely associated
with various types of respiratory diseases or even lung cancer. Also, people in
big cities are being bombarded with too much information from the media,
including TV, social networking sites and advertisements while the large
proportion of information is fake news or exaggerated commercials. This can
cause confusion or, in some cases, social anarchy.
In my opinion, the Government should do what they can to encourage city
dwellers to move to regional areas. First, it will reduce the number of vehiclesin cities, which will definitely improve the situation where air pollution caused
by traffic disturbs the lives of city residents. Furthermore, fewer people living in
big cities will relieve the pressure on these cities’ housing supply systems when
many people are living reluctantly in small, suffocating spaces. I think this is
extremely important point to consider because living spaces are linked to
people’s mental health and how they perform at work.
In conclusion, severe air pollution and information bombardment are among
the most serious problems facing city dwellers nowadays, and I feel that
relevant authorities should encourage people to relocate to other areas to live.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, well, while, as to, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51071428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8334711351 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0500287988 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377535193501 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120336084897 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101309404842 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090201471239 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821125556456 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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