People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays, the overgrowth of population brings many problems that affect the citizen daily life. For example, traffic and pollution are the most popular problems that every people who live in a large city have to deal with. In my opinion, the government should mitigate this problem by migrating people to smaller regional towns to reduce the population densities.
To begin with, people who live in a big city may be late at works due to the heavy traffics, and it may become worse if it is rainy that day. In addition, with the large densities of traffic, the accident is inevitable, and the hospital may be overload due to the overpopulation. On the other hand, the more traffic the more carbon-dioxide is produced to the air, and the more citizen is vulnerable to numerous serious disease involving lung and heart. Moreover, noise pollution also a serious problem with some older people since they are sensitive to noise.
The government should take an action to mitigate these problems by encouraging the resident to migrate to the smaller regional towns. Firstly, the reason why people love to live in a big city is that they have more well-paid jobs. Therefore, the authority should attract more company to build their office in a town. In addition, the convenient shops and highway street should be constructed for bringing the comfortable to the citizen in their daily activity. They also need to build the schools with qualitative facilities to attract parents and make them believe that this town is a good place to raise their children.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that living in a large city brings many advantages. However, the citizen today are dealing with many problems in their everyday life. Therefore, I personally believe that the government should encourage them to migrate to smaller towns by building more facilities to attract them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04193548387 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69946038466 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493548387097 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5504621484 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412763302455 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139370532189 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910332559056 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279144489187 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110528751509 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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