People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
In recent years, migrating to large cities has been becoming a common trend as people from different areas looking for life-changing opportunities, thus causing many inconveniences such as house problems, traffic jam and pollution. Personally, I believe motivating people to move to smaller cities or rural areas is a good solution.
A dense population brings about many issues. First of all, the number of housing demand dramatically increased, resulting in a very high rent or buy price due to insufficient supply. Therefore, forcing low-income people to live in slums like poor those in HongKong where living conditions are extremely difficult. Secondly, traffic can be a serious headache. Most people prefer privately owned vehicles because they are more comfortable, faster and more flexible for doing multiple tasks on one trip than almost any form of public transport, which results in endless daily traffic jams like Los Angeles street at 5 P.M. Furthermore, with high volumes of traffic, large quantities of pollutants are being released into the atmosphere, reducing air quality and this is the main cause of the growth in the number of people suffering from respiratory disease such as lung cancer.
Authorities, thence, should encourage people moving to areas of the sparse population. Not only does this help reduce the problems in big cities, but also provides the citizens with more job opportunities. A small population decreases the intensity of competition between job seekers as there are fewer people applying for the same position. In addition, it will reduce the number of vehicles in cities, which will definitely reduce the levels of air pollution, which is hazardous to the health of residents.
In conclusion, an overly dense population in big cities undeniable cause a lot of issues: housing problems, congestion, pollution..., and governments should support the movement of people to smaller towns and rural areas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93219990644 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645901639344 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.876888702 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.25 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239637272698 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829669750071 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686799580451 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144801990201 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387772751735 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.