People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that more and more people now opt for bringing their family together when they transform to the another country in order to seek a better occupation. From my perspective of bringing up a child, this phenomenon gains more benefits than drawbacks.
It is evident that moving to a new country without individual families takes adverse impacts on a great number of domains in their lives. Despite the fact that a man goes to another country to earn more money to support his family’s life quality, his wife or partner will cope with tons of challenges when bringing up their children alone. In terms of each individual, in a new country, it may find himself the feelings of loneliness as well as isolation. Furthermore, while having supportive colleagues or new friends, some people are frequently addicted to gambling or drinking without any advice of their wives. Thus, it is undoubted that residing in an unfamiliar nation due to wages and a better profession results in negative influences on individual families.
Contrary to this issue, as a consequence of taking families together when making a movement in people’s career, there are considerable advantages in their lives, especially in children. It is advantageous that children can get access to a greater education environment in the light of both of higher qualities and facilities in educational system. For instance, if a man has a chance to work in a technological enterprise in the US, and he stays together with his wife and children together, his children can broaden their practical knowledge instead of focusing mainly on theory like in Vietnam. In the other words, it is undeniable that children who receive the support of both parents during formative years will have a better upbringing process, compared to the others living without their fathers or mothers. Therefore, staying together should be the best to bring up a child instead of living alone in a distant country.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that taking individual families while working in another nation is more beneficial than leaving their wives and children behind.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07714285714 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86055367839 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6801003985 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.692307692 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245458531402 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855799703879 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843321961583 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158191512365 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202623402099 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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